I keep getting this message when I press certain options, I have tried on both my phone and my pc. Is anyone else having this issue? I understand that it is still a new game
Ah~ ^^_ it's nice to find a text based game that's engaging! :) it's a hard thing to do, especially considering most writers rely on visuals to carry their story along, so congrats! n_n/
Sure sure sure, few errors, spelling mistakes, and what not, but that's to be expected when working alone! I know it's only gonna get better from here~ :p
I looove kinky crap like this, and xou're doing it well :p keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for the encouragement! Believe me if I had any drawing bone in my body, I would focus on the visual too. :D
Anyway, this version on itch.io is text-only (to avoid copyrights in the future) but you can find another one on my twitter which has something to help your imagination. Not drawn nor furry art though sorry.
However my complain is that the narration is confusing as it keeps switching back and forth from 1st person view to 2nd person view and so on. The grammar seems a lil off so I would suggest get some proofreaders.
Love the game! Very nice direction you're headed in! I'll highlight corrected edits for you if you want to send me the text. :) I missed my calling as an editor I think, but have actually edited a few novels for a friend of mine in my spare time lol
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Hm, it looks like a problem when you press the back button? Was you able to resolve it by spamming it? Thanks for letting me know!
Hi, this bug should be fixed now. Thanks for your report!
Ah~ ^^_ it's nice to find a text based game that's engaging! :) it's a hard thing to do, especially considering most writers rely on visuals to carry their story along, so congrats! n_n/
Sure sure sure, few errors, spelling mistakes, and what not, but that's to be expected when working alone! I know it's only gonna get better from here~ :p
I looove kinky crap like this, and xou're doing it well :p keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for the encouragement! Believe me if I had any drawing bone in my body, I would focus on the visual too. :D
Anyway, this version on itch.io is text-only (to avoid copyrights in the future) but you can find another one on my twitter which has something to help your imagination. Not drawn nor furry art though sorry.
Great game so far, looking forward to seeing how it progresses
Thanks! Bro will be the focus of the next major update to give you more agencies during the day. Stay tuned. :)
Hiiii What's your Twitter
You can find it on More Information section or click on my name on the game screen. ;)
The game has potential, it is overall good
However my complain is that the narration is confusing as it keeps switching back and forth from 1st person view to 2nd person view and so on. The grammar seems a lil off so I would suggest get some proofreaders.
Thanks for the input! Trying my best as an 1-man team and not a native speaker. :D
If you find any grammar, spelling mistake, typos or POV errors, please report where and I will fix it.
Love the game! Very nice direction you're headed in! I'll highlight corrected edits for you if you want to send me the text. :) I missed my calling as an editor I think, but have actually edited a few novels for a friend of mine in my spare time lol
Does the brother have a route?? bcs all he does is just +1 lust no action or anything...
For now, he's just an annoyance to you. I'm working on him right now and will update very soon. :)