nice game, I enjoyed it a lot. I found a bug at the end, where I kept having sex with dad and his suspicion got higher with no warning, no explanation, and I suddenly got the bad ending. Is this normal? His affection was very high
(can't wait to see more story, like bathroom action and the big bro!)
First scenario, what was the father's affection? If it reaches 45, he should never ever gain any suspicion during the act. Yes, doing the deeds with him does increase the suspicion.
Second scenario, did you have sex with him in public spaces (i.e Living room/Kitchen)? Also was the brother's suspicion high? If yes to all above then you probably got caught by the brother and then it lead to a bad ending.
Not sure if you're aware but if once suspicion reaches 100, you will get a bad ending.
If you can remember the details leading to the ending then it would be great.
In my first game, I got caught a few times by the brother in the living room for example, so I guess that could explain the problem.
I played a second time and made sure Dad's affection was always 45/45, I confirm the suspicion was still going up, even when I washed the dishes and everything. Maybe I got caught once or twice by the brother, but dad's suspicion got very high at around 90 I think, just before I got the good ending, it was close.
Yes I understand suspicion got me the bad ending, I'm just surprised it went up so fast without warning. I thought there would be a message every time it goes up, like affection, but I can understand if you want this to be a secret thing.
wait I'm sorry, those are issues from the older version. I downloaded the one I found on one your tweets. I'm trying the new version 0.1d and it looks better. Sorry for the trouble, keep up the great work!
Oh sorry, the art is from a VN game by Moritake. However, now he's completely disappeared on the face of the internet as well as many of his works for unknown reasons.
I have the effect of dad at 45 but I can't do anything else and I don't know how to use the pills, I don't believe it either, the dad never wants to and the brother does xd
After you reach 45 affection & 50 lust, you can talk to him and there is an option to an ending. Then you could replay the game and go for a low affection run, it has a different "good" ending also.
A few. Yours is definitely one of the higher probabilities but I do not want to limit to just endings but a thing that is exclusive when you go pass the 45 threshold (or negative affection rate). Still in brainstorming process to implement this elegantly.
Another one is more characters but I will deviate from the taboo aspect but still in the forbidden area like a college professor, a priest from a completely fictional religion, a conservative politician, etc. This is easier-ish, since it will be less technical and just depends if the writing goddess will smile upon me or not.
With all of that being said, probably the next best step is getting original arts in there. As much as you like my writing, nothing beats a good ol' sucking and fucking in actual colors and not just texts.
Having original art is good and all, but I really like the way you put those real "media" in. Really help with the imagination. I think part of it is because you chose the actors really well, beefy and stuff lmao. Is there any plan for us to be on top? I mean options so you can choose, with proper approach ofc. Topping daddy Wolf in a fan fiction like this is out of this world lol, combine with your amazing writing skill.
That could be a possibility but it poses a challenging problem that Austin Wolf bottoming porn is few and far between. But hey, I for sure can try to find some good beefy bottom porns for your viewing pleasure. ;)
I'll definitely consider it in the future just to break out from the lack of writing inspirations.
Also, thanks for the compliments about my writing, hope you don't mind the erratic spelling errors or grammar weirdness. lol
This game is pretty fun. I have the dad to 50/50 lust and 32/45 affection. I'm stuck in a loop and I can't seem to get the ending. Is there anything I'm missing to trigger a good ending besides raising suspicion to 100 where I get the bad ending? Or is it just the bad ending at the moment?
You either need to get his affection to 45 or 0. Afterwards, you can talk to him and there should be an option to a good ending if you haven't figured it out yet.
Hi! So, I really liked your writing style. I almost never find myself drawn to a purely text-based game. I don't know if you only wanted to keep it to text for a particular reason, but thought to share this website if not. It has completely free use facial pictures and I've noticed some other text heavy games use images from it to represent characters. Anyway, if you haven't heard of it, it might be worth scoping out for options for players to pick from for a character or just set images for each character: https://generated.photos
Also, apologies if it's presumptuous to suggest and link this, but just thought it could help to have a visual of your characters.
I am aware of AI generated photo and such like the one you linked and artbreeder.
For the "you" character, personally, I try to keep the descriptions as minimal as possible so players can actually put themselves in the story. What do you think?
For other characters, yes it would be amazing to have some visuals. Resources are not particularly overflowing here and I can't draw for shit, so gotta make do with just texts for now.
With all that being said, I'm honestly a bit lazy, especially with my plate full of writing and coding.
Finally, there is another version on my twitter with some media but they are copyrighted so I don't want to post it here.
Whoa! I just looked into artbreeder and that's really cool. I'm definitely having fun browsing it now lol.
I totally agree with that for the "you" character of this kind of game. Definitely feels nice not to have any dissonance between the player and the main character.
And good to know about the other characters. I totally get the drawing struggle. I've been wanting to try to put a game together one day, and have been playing with the idea of Renpy, but making the commitment and leap of time and resources it would all take to learn is a bit daunting for me so I totally getcha on resources x_x;
And good to know! I'll check that version out. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing!
Funny enough, I did try Ren'py to do a half-assed google translated (+ my imperfect English) remake for a Moritake game but quitted 1/3 way through from boredom. It's not super complicated (at least to me) but yea, unless you can draw or know someone who can, it's not a wise idea to jump into the VN scene.
Interesting. Yeah, I can't draw and was disputing taking a stab at learning Daz3d (as if learning both together wouldn't be a feat of time and effort) I just wanna use my writing degree for a similar kinda thing, I think, but the only idea I have for a game would be maybe too intensive for a first stab at things.
Try giving him a handjob again. In the heat of the moment, he will accept your offer to blow him, afterward he will be more open to your deviant acts. It's a natural course of actions in my mind as I think people tend to get reckless during these passionate moments. ;)
My dude... You're awesome! No really, this game is awesome just like you!
I'm so grateful that you had the courage to make this game... I understand all the taboo around and all the hate you must have received, but... Know this, what you did was amazing... Really, you are the best...
Hope we can see more of you in the future ;)
(No... Really, I love for what you made... Cheers! To you!)
this is rly hot and up my alley, cant wait to see whats next 😏👌 but also, was wondering why i couldnt progress with dennis past offering bj? lust stat at 40/50 with full affection and no suspicion from him, in case that helps. this happened when i chose the next step:
Can you not ever chat with your (step-) brother yet? Also, is 20 the current max on lust for your (step-)dad? Just wondering if I've reached the end of where you currently are at with the game or if I'm just missing the next step after several 6 packs and some viagra stuff I can't figure out how to take lol
Chatting is just there for easy affection gain, if you want to lower the affection, you need to proposition them while the lust is still low & they haven't engaged in any acts with you yet. This comes with a suspicion cost though, hate fucking is not easy business.
Well if the lust reaches 20, you should proceed to the next step - give him a handjob to get the ball rolling.
Because the time & sus cost vary for each tier of actions, there is a cap for the lust gained for them. So people can't just spam tease, for example, to get to the good ending & disrupt the narrative.
The viagra stuff still hasn't got an use yet. Sorry, just buy beers only for now.
If you mean if there is a new option for hate-fucking once affection reaches 0, then there isn't any.
The scenes change dynamically depending on your affection (even the teasings and touching), so the current "offer your ass" should display the correct contents for hate-fucking if your affection is low enough.
Otherwise, the only other thing is that my writing is not raunchy enough for hate fucking. :(
I keep getting this message when I press certain options, I have tried on both my phone and my pc. Is anyone else having this issue? I understand that it is still a new game
Ah~ ^^_ it's nice to find a text based game that's engaging! :) it's a hard thing to do, especially considering most writers rely on visuals to carry their story along, so congrats! n_n/
Sure sure sure, few errors, spelling mistakes, and what not, but that's to be expected when working alone! I know it's only gonna get better from here~ :p
I looove kinky crap like this, and xou're doing it well :p keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for the encouragement! Believe me if I had any drawing bone in my body, I would focus on the visual too. :D
Anyway, this version on itch.io is text-only (to avoid copyrights in the future) but you can find another one on my twitter which has something to help your imagination. Not drawn nor furry art though sorry.
However my complain is that the narration is confusing as it keeps switching back and forth from 1st person view to 2nd person view and so on. The grammar seems a lil off so I would suggest get some proofreaders.
Love the game! Very nice direction you're headed in! I'll highlight corrected edits for you if you want to send me the text. :) I missed my calling as an editor I think, but have actually edited a few novels for a friend of mine in my spare time lol
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Get 50 lust and 45 (for love ending) or 0 (for hate ending) affection.
I keep checking this page every day for the next update :')
Sorry, lots of problems at work right now so I haven't had time to focus on the game. Hopefully, it will be released in the next few days.
nice game, I enjoyed it a lot. I found a bug at the end, where I kept having sex with dad and his suspicion got higher with no warning, no explanation, and I suddenly got the bad ending. Is this normal? His affection was very high
(can't wait to see more story, like bathroom action and the big bro!)
First scenario, what was the father's affection? If it reaches 45, he should never ever gain any suspicion during the act. Yes, doing the deeds with him does increase the suspicion.
Second scenario, did you have sex with him in public spaces (i.e Living room/Kitchen)? Also was the brother's suspicion high? If yes to all above then you probably got caught by the brother and then it lead to a bad ending.
Not sure if you're aware but if once suspicion reaches 100, you will get a bad ending.
If you can remember the details leading to the ending then it would be great.
Thanks! Bro contents will be released soon.
In my first game, I got caught a few times by the brother in the living room for example, so I guess that could explain the problem.
I played a second time and made sure Dad's affection was always 45/45, I confirm the suspicion was still going up, even when I washed the dishes and everything. Maybe I got caught once or twice by the brother, but dad's suspicion got very high at around 90 I think, just before I got the good ending, it was close.
Yes I understand suspicion got me the bad ending, I'm just surprised it went up so fast without warning. I thought there would be a message every time it goes up, like affection, but I can understand if you want this to be a secret thing.
wait I'm sorry, those are issues from the older version. I downloaded the one I found on one your tweets. I'm trying the new version 0.1d and it looks better. Sorry for the trouble, keep up the great work!
where did you get the title art from?
Oh sorry, the art is from a VN game by Moritake. However, now he's completely disappeared on the face of the internet as well as many of his works for unknown reasons.
también un error que vi fue que cuando tocas la entrepierna de el hermano no se ve el texto de su reacción
Brother's contents are not in the game right now. So it is missing.
It will probably be there in 0.2 patch in around 1 or 2 weeks.
The pill doesn't have any use for now. Sorry.
After you reach 45 affection & 50 lust, you can talk to him and there is an option to an ending. Then you could replay the game and go for a low affection run, it has a different "good" ending also.
Very well done
What's the plan after the brother? Combo endings/scenes with both dad and bro?
Cause i need that, your writing is hot.
A few. Yours is definitely one of the higher probabilities but I do not want to limit to just endings but a thing that is exclusive when you go pass the 45 threshold (or negative affection rate). Still in brainstorming process to implement this elegantly.
Another one is more characters but I will deviate from the taboo aspect but still in the forbidden area like a college professor, a priest from a completely fictional religion, a conservative politician, etc. This is easier-ish, since it will be less technical and just depends if the writing goddess will smile upon me or not.
With all of that being said, probably the next best step is getting original arts in there. As much as you like my writing, nothing beats a good ol' sucking and fucking in actual colors and not just texts.
music to my ears lmao.
but honestly good choice for dad and bro's actors. I know the dad, but the bro is maybe some random dude on the internet?
Yea, I have no idea who. lol
Having original art is good and all, but I really like the way you put those real "media" in. Really help with the imagination. I think part of it is because you chose the actors really well, beefy and stuff lmao. Is there any plan for us to be on top? I mean options so you can choose, with proper approach ofc. Topping daddy Wolf in a fan fiction like this is out of this world lol, combine with your amazing writing skill.
That could be a possibility but it poses a challenging problem that Austin Wolf bottoming porn is few and far between. But hey, I for sure can try to find some good beefy bottom porns for your viewing pleasure. ;)
I'll definitely consider it in the future just to break out from the lack of writing inspirations.
Also, thanks for the compliments about my writing, hope you don't mind the erratic spelling errors or grammar weirdness. lol
This game is pretty fun. I have the dad to 50/50 lust and 32/45 affection. I'm stuck in a loop and I can't seem to get the ending. Is there anything I'm missing to trigger a good ending besides raising suspicion to 100 where I get the bad ending? Or is it just the bad ending at the moment?
You either need to get his affection to 45 or 0. Afterwards, you can talk to him and there should be an option to a good ending if you haven't figured it out yet.
Hi! So, I really liked your writing style. I almost never find myself drawn to a purely text-based game. I don't know if you only wanted to keep it to text for a particular reason, but thought to share this website if not. It has completely free use facial pictures and I've noticed some other text heavy games use images from it to represent characters. Anyway, if you haven't heard of it, it might be worth scoping out for options for players to pick from for a character or just set images for each character: https://generated.photos
Also, apologies if it's presumptuous to suggest and link this, but just thought it could help to have a visual of your characters.
Thanks! Never apologize for being helpful. :D
I am aware of AI generated photo and such like the one you linked and artbreeder.
For the "you" character, personally, I try to keep the descriptions as minimal as possible so players can actually put themselves in the story. What do you think?
For other characters, yes it would be amazing to have some visuals. Resources are not particularly overflowing here and I can't draw for shit, so gotta make do with just texts for now.
With all that being said, I'm honestly a bit lazy, especially with my plate full of writing and coding.
Finally, there is another version on my twitter with some media but they are copyrighted so I don't want to post it here.
Whoa! I just looked into artbreeder and that's really cool. I'm definitely having fun browsing it now lol.
I totally agree with that for the "you" character of this kind of game. Definitely feels nice not to have any dissonance between the player and the main character.
And good to know about the other characters. I totally get the drawing struggle. I've been wanting to try to put a game together one day, and have been playing with the idea of Renpy, but making the commitment and leap of time and resources it would all take to learn is a bit daunting for me so I totally getcha on resources x_x;
And good to know! I'll check that version out. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing!
Funny enough, I did try Ren'py to do a half-assed google translated (+ my imperfect English) remake for a Moritake game but quitted 1/3 way through from boredom. It's not super complicated (at least to me) but yea, unless you can draw or know someone who can, it's not a wise idea to jump into the VN scene.
Enjoy!
Interesting. Yeah, I can't draw and was disputing taking a stab at learning Daz3d (as if learning both together wouldn't be a feat of time and effort) I just wanna use my writing degree for a similar kinda thing, I think, but the only idea I have for a game would be maybe too intensive for a first stab at things.
Anywho, thanks! I will haha.
how do you progress past 30/50 lust because handjob doesn’t raise lust anymore and I still get rejected from blowjob?
Try giving him a handjob again. In the heat of the moment, he will accept your offer to blow him, afterward he will be more open to your deviant acts. It's a natural course of actions in my mind as I think people tend to get reckless during these passionate moments. ;)
it worked thanks!
Really good, but I wish there was a counter showing how much lust/affection/suspicion a character has. It's hard to keep count.
There is a character stats tab, on the left side bar above "Save" & "Restart", that shows all the lust, affection and sus values of each character.
If you mean the value showing in the scenes instead of just the simple "+ x lust/aff/sus" then it is something I need to think about.
Also, I don't suppose you have an walkthrough anywhere do you? I'm starting to get stuck in this game...
No so far, I may do one when I finish with the bro.
If you're still stuck, let me know where and I will answer it.
My dude... You're awesome! No really, this game is awesome just like you!
I'm so grateful that you had the courage to make this game... I understand all the taboo around and all the hate you must have received, but... Know this, what you did was amazing... Really, you are the best...
Hope we can see more of you in the future ;)
(No... Really, I love for what you made... Cheers! To you!)
this is rly hot and up my alley, cant wait to see whats next 😏👌 but also, was wondering why i couldnt progress with dennis past offering bj? lust stat at 40/50 with full affection and no suspicion from him, in case that helps. this happened when i chose the next step:
Did you choose the option to proposition him to fuck you in the middle of the regular sucking?
After that initiation, you can start fucking with him regularly and finally get to the ending. :)
ahh i didnt, i mustve missed it. thanks!
Can you not ever chat with your (step-) brother yet? Also, is 20 the current max on lust for your (step-)dad? Just wondering if I've reached the end of where you currently are at with the game or if I'm just missing the next step after several 6 packs and some viagra stuff I can't figure out how to take lol
Chatting is just there for easy affection gain, if you want to lower the affection, you need to proposition them while the lust is still low & they haven't engaged in any acts with you yet. This comes with a suspicion cost though, hate fucking is not easy business.
Well if the lust reaches 20, you should proceed to the next step - give him a handjob to get the ball rolling.
Because the time & sus cost vary for each tier of actions, there is a cap for the lust gained for them. So people can't just spam tease, for example, to get to the good ending & disrupt the narrative.
The viagra stuff still hasn't got an use yet. Sorry, just buy beers only for now.
Not sure if you are aware of this but are you using JoiPlay?
Playing html game on your standard browsers usually will mess up the media and JoiPlay can help displaying the element correctly.
If the problem still persists after that then let me know.
Never heard of that. I'll look into it, thanks!
hey great game so far. does the hate fucking work yet? I had the dad to 0 but can't seem to trigger that
If you mean if there is a new option for hate-fucking once affection reaches 0, then there isn't any.
The scenes change dynamically depending on your affection (even the teasings and touching), so the current "offer your ass" should display the correct contents for hate-fucking if your affection is low enough.
Otherwise, the only other thing is that my writing is not raunchy enough for hate fucking. :(
Hm, it looks like a problem when you press the back button? Was you able to resolve it by spamming it? Thanks for letting me know!
Hi, this bug should be fixed now. Thanks for your report!
Ah~ ^^_ it's nice to find a text based game that's engaging! :) it's a hard thing to do, especially considering most writers rely on visuals to carry their story along, so congrats! n_n/
Sure sure sure, few errors, spelling mistakes, and what not, but that's to be expected when working alone! I know it's only gonna get better from here~ :p
I looove kinky crap like this, and xou're doing it well :p keep up the good work!
Thanks so much for the encouragement! Believe me if I had any drawing bone in my body, I would focus on the visual too. :D
Anyway, this version on itch.io is text-only (to avoid copyrights in the future) but you can find another one on my twitter which has something to help your imagination. Not drawn nor furry art though sorry.
Great game so far, looking forward to seeing how it progresses
Thanks! Bro will be the focus of the next major update to give you more agencies during the day. Stay tuned. :)
Hiiii What's your Twitter
You can find it on More Information section or click on my name on the game screen. ;)
The game has potential, it is overall good
However my complain is that the narration is confusing as it keeps switching back and forth from 1st person view to 2nd person view and so on. The grammar seems a lil off so I would suggest get some proofreaders.
Thanks for the input! Trying my best as an 1-man team and not a native speaker. :D
If you find any grammar, spelling mistake, typos or POV errors, please report where and I will fix it.
Love the game! Very nice direction you're headed in! I'll highlight corrected edits for you if you want to send me the text. :) I missed my calling as an editor I think, but have actually edited a few novels for a friend of mine in my spare time lol
Does the brother have a route?? bcs all he does is just +1 lust no action or anything...
For now, he's just an annoyance to you. I'm working on him right now and will update very soon. :)